Clients: Grammarly and Mailchimp
Year: 2024
Product: Landing page copy
Brief: Rewrite the header, subheader, and CTA to be more compelling and human.
Grammarly Original
Header: AI can help you find the right words, every time
Subheader: Your partners love you because of your work ethic, your reputation, and your value. Let AI enhance what you want to say - not take away from it. Find out how to responsibly incorporate AI into your business and help improve your writing, without losing your heart.
CTA: Sign up now (it’s free!)
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Mailchimp Original
*This is spec work
Header: Your profits are waiting 💰
Subheader: The #1 email marketing and automations platform is ready to bring your business more opens, clicks, and sales.
CTA: Start your free trial now
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